Clean Sweep
Apropos of nothing, I'm reminded of one of my least favorite contemporary linguistic absurdities, one that has become unbelievably popular, even among people who should know better: "At this point in time...." I mean, c'mon. I'd like to popularize the phrase "at that point in space," meaning, of course, "there."
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Yes I wonder at the demise of concision in language. It's so much easier to say "now" instead of "at this point in time" but on the flip side [somehow] the latter less poetic. We've come a long way since Austen's "For what do we live, but to make sport for our neighbors and laugh at them in our turn" These days we can poke people with one simple click on Facebook! LOL Oh... I dunno.
Um... that should be the latter (more) poetic. It's been a long week. ;-)
Another winner, John C.
"Clutter is the disease of American writing." -- William Zinsser, p.7, On Writing Well
You had it right the first time, Jean. To take a cue from Andrew, verbosity is the enemy of poetry, which is all about concision. Somehow Yeats's "We sat together at one summer's end," loses something when it becomes "we sat together at that point in time at the end of summer." [Forgive me, just being silly.]
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